Color dispersions handled well on such a large format; technique employed with delicacy and painting is strong in color presentation; excellent subject matter; nice differences between foreground and background; well unified painting.
B+ B or B-
General pointillism painting technique very effective; figure drawing may need better proportioning; color balance good--perhaps dark concentration too specified in and around shapes; good size relationships with shapes.
C+ or C
All over outlook is pleasing; techniques very well done; most hues in good contrasts with others; one or more objects has need of better color presentation, perhaps too dark or not "realistic" enough.
